Rewrite the paragraph below taken from the story, putting in your own adjectives. Place the adjectives before the words that are underlined (the nouns).

• How else can you make this paragraph more exciting?
• Where can you include fronted adverbials?

Use a thesaurus to help you think of some interesting words.

The house wasn’t nearly large enough for so many people, and life was extremely uncomfortable for them all. There were only two rooms in the place altogether, and there was only one bed.
The bed was given to the four old grandparents because they were so old and tired. They were so tired, they never got out of it.

Once completed, read through your work carefully to ensure it makes sense.